nice, boredom ftw

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bhahaha. I see toronto

that's great !

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Amazing!

A very dreamy view, filled with surreal colors. Me likes lots. However, as always, I have something to add to that, things I think could improve this work a lot.

The main that keeps this piece from being perfect, in my idea, is the big, soft wbright spots scattered around it. Mostly the one to the left, the one to the right and the ones scattered along the left rock. They seem to somehow distract the eye when you look over it, leading it away from the main subject. If you could remove those, it'd be a lot better.

The other issue I have, is the girl. I only noticed her when I went to look at the piece closely, and I started wondering about it. I didn't notice her at first, while she seems inproportionately big ( and doesn't cast a shadow), and I figured she'd be there for a reason. I mean, the society is on the other rock, and she's there, pretty mcuha lone. Why? What's she doing there? Was it a choice? Was she banished? I'd love to have seen some more clues regarding why the girl is there.

I think that's about it. Please note I'm not trying to take a jab at your work: I love it, and simply want to see it become even better than it already is.

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Thanks, it's not my usual type of work. I'd call this fast food style

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Thats right, they just needed some air.. thats all

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Thanks for supporting!

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Thanks!

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Very nice.. and you're right too. The reasoning for the girl is pretty simple. Ever look at Dali's work and wonder what the heck is going on, nothing makes sense. I wanted to add a surreal feel to this, just like a dream where some things just dont make sense. This girl is alone on her rock in the sky and I think it makes the viewers think about it.
About the technical mistakes, believe me there are plenty more This isn't my usual style, I usually paint the entire thing. This was more like a quickie. Thanks for the awesome critique!

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